tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3725663863867982757.post1191801138545333777..comments2023-08-17T19:08:26.398-07:00Comments on No One To Play With: Mystery of the Burned One, part 1Rory Bracebucklehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12756977087604515407noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3725663863867982757.post-24174941065311629742013-12-01T11:56:15.883-08:002013-12-01T11:56:15.883-08:00You are absolutely right about that. Even though h...You are absolutely right about that. Even though he was humiliated, that should have only been touché, and not a coup de grace. I think I saw the scene as going on too long. Once thing I promise myself to improve is cutting length. But, that turned into a less interesting story!<br /><br />I wasn't satisfied by the direction of this one and the ensuing result...which is probably why it took me more than two months to come back and finish it off. Still glad I did...there is more potential for exciting stuff in this campaign.Rory Bracebucklehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12756977087604515407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3725663863867982757.post-27515321707419334782013-12-01T08:08:06.010-08:002013-12-01T08:08:06.010-08:00I thought when the NPC lord turned out to be an or...I thought when the NPC lord turned out to be an orator there might be a debate scene, but the roll that led to him being so easily "humiliated" by a semi-legal argument cut that option rather short. Still, that stunted moment could actually be interesting for developing that NPC if you so desired. Why, indeed, would an orator be so quickly "shut down" by such a quick retort?JFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00564104029467943674noreply@blogger.com